stuns them into silence
as they lay back
on warm sand
and dream into the sky.
Ocean calm, cool, steady
leads them
on a journey toward the edge of earth.
Skin,
wet,
shivers
beneath Ocean's breath.
Reach up and pull a star from the sky
they put it in a jar
and the night is
not so dark.
Ocean, calm, cool, steady
carries them,
drifting, toward the edge of the Earth.
Breath,
quiet,
quickens
beneath Ocean's waves.
Nighttime beauty
stuns them into silence
as they lay back
on warm sand
and dream into the sky.
This is interesting!!! I like the structure you have used here. It is quite unusual, so, I call this quite bold and beautiful.
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