standin on the highway
looking for his mind
this old man looks up just in time
to see them three sweet young things
drivin down the line
street on his face
step towards their car
point gnarled hands
to pulls his trigger
yellin as he busts that cap
standin on the highway
looking for his mind
this old man looks up just in time
to see them three sweet young things
drivin by
This is interesting! The structure obstructs the understanding. I shall return to look at it at a different angle. Keep writing!!!
ReplyDeletewonderful piece with a lot of comment weaved through it
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